My Immortal
Short Story • 2006 • Romance
ReportThis short story contains 30 potentially triggering events.
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pro tip if ur actually looking for content warnings look at the themes page of the my immortal wiki
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Somehow, despite the presence of Voldemort and most characters being in Slytherin, there are no snakes.
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A pile of times the characters get into fights with each other and storm away angrily without saying goodbye. Draco at one point calls Ebony a "Muggle bitch" and then runs away from her.
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Ebony yells at Draco a few times, and he forgives her, but it really doesn't rise to the level of abuse.
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Voldemort keeps following Ebony to demand she kill another character.
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The father of a character is stated to have sexually assaulted and otherwise abused them. Canon abusive parents like the Malfoys are not seemingly abusive in the My Immortal universe, however.
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Most of the characters are 17, so technically minors. They are kidnapped, threatened by Voldemort, Ebony is told to kill Vampire (Harry). One character is stripped naked by this weird fic's version of Snape. In the fic's "gothic" backstories for characters, one character was raped by a family member.
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Ebony slaps Vampire after they make-out. Ebony blames Vampire for leading her astray from Draco. The making-out was fully consensual.
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It's stated that Voldemort became evil because someone broke his heart and hurt him.
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There are many comments about Ebony, Draco and random characters doing "pot, coke, and crack" as well as smoking "drugs." One of the professors also has a stated addiction to a substance called "Voldemortserum." Exactly what that substance is or its effects aren't clear.
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Pot, coke, crack, cigarettes, and generic "drugs" are all consumed, usually at or before MCR concerts.
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Underage characters drink after a concert.
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No, a woman does the slapping. Ebony slaps Vampire.
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Ebony, Draco and Vampire are placed in chains by Snape. Later Snape is chained up for his evil deeds.
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Snape (or Snap) takes off all of Draco's clothes and threatens to sexually assualt him.
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Several times. It is attempted at least once, but Ebony, for no logical reason, asks Lupin if he plans to rape her when he knocks on her door.
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The victims are in their late teens, but still underage. The term "pedo" or "pedophile" is used a TON in this story. Ebony calls several professors, including Snape, Lupin, and Hagrid, pedos.
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Numerous drugs are consumed consensually. There is, late in the story, a line about a character trying to give Ebony "amnesia potion" but she doesn't drink it.
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Ebony bullies a "prep" named Brittney multiple times because the prep wears pink and likes different music. Ebony also sucks someone's blood against their will for saying Ebony is scary.
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There is sexual assault against men, but it is not treated as "lesser" or "funny."
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Snape threatens to rape Draco but is stopped before he can.
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Many, many references to characters self-harming with razors
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Ebony stabs Snaketail to death because he kidnapped Draco.
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The vampire characters will "cry tears of blood" when really upset, but it doesn't hurt their eyes.
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Ebony seems to pass out when having "visions."
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The Cruciatus curse gets tossed around like it's going out of style. Snape also has whips, for some reason, and beats Draco and Vampire with them.
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After Ebony confronts Snape and Lupin for spying on her, it's stated that Snape has blood dripping from his hand "where Dumbledore's wand had shot him." How badly the hand is hurt isn't described beyond that.
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In later chapters, where Ebony goes back in time (yep) she prevents Draco's father from having his arm shot off. There is no semblance to canon here.
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It is stated that Hermione, who is known as Bloody Mary in the story, was "kidnapped when she was born" from her vampire parents. And her "actual" last name is Smith, not Granger. Even more bizarrely, Neville has the exact same back story, with him being kidnapped as a baby.
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Ebony is 17 and her outfits, which are usually provacative with short skirts, cleavage, huge slits, and leather are described in agonizing detail. Ebony is also described having sex often. And filming a porno with Draco.
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"Snaketail," who is the story's version of Wormtail, is de-aged to 16 for reasons unknown. Ebony stabs him to death for kidnapping Draco.
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In a way that makes zero sense, but yes. When Ebony goes back in time, she jumps in front of a bullet to save Draco's dad.
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"Snaketail" is stabbed to death by Ebony. Draco is, for a few chapters, alleged to have died. He comes back with no explanation, though.
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Yes, but a few chapters later the death is totally ignored. Draco is stated to be dead via suicide, and Ebony spends a whole chapter crying about it. Then, without explanation, Draco is kidnapped and not dead anymore.
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There is a line about Voldemort getting a "dude, you're so retarded look on his face" when he confronts Ebony early in the story.
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Vampire's (Harry Potter) parents still seem to be dead. One of the "gothic" characters had a father commit suicide.
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It's a mess of cheating. Ebony cheats on Draco with Vampire. Vampire used to be with Draco until Draco cheated with some prep. Ebony accuses Draco of cheating.
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The gothic version of Hermione loses her mother and father.
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Draco. Voldemort apparently "has him bondage."
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Ebony takes a bath and is spied on by 2 adult men.
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People slit their wrists or cut themselves with razors probably once per chapter.
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There is a comment about someone possessing Draco and making him "do it" with Snape. The story is such a mess by that point it's hard to tell who or what was possessing him.
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Takes place in Hogwarts but I don't think the many ghosts are ever mentioned
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Blood is consumed by several vampiric characters but no person or major body part ends up eaten.
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It's stated various characters were sent to Azkaban (wizard prison) for crimes including pedophilia, being old and dangerous, and "being too gothic."
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Ebony accuses Draco of cheating on her with Vampire (Harry). Vampire is Draco's ex boyfriend, and Draco cheated on him with a girl. Ebony makes out with Vampire while she is dating Draco.
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There are gay slurs, but not specifically transphobic ones.
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No characters are stated or implied to be trans.
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Many characters have "gothic" nicknames like Vampire, Bloody Mary, Satan, etc and their preferred gothic names are used.
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Apparently this fic's version of Dumbledore does. He is also said to be "too old" and has dementia, poor man.
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Ebony goes to the hospital after slitting her wrists. The author also states that she had to go to the hospital for the same reason. After Lucius and Sirius are rescued, they are described being on stretchers and given medicine by a nurse.
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I think they're all mentally ill to some degree. Most characters are also violent and pull out guns or use curses on each other.
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That isn’t what the tag means!
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Ebony states she wishes "Satan had made her less beautiful" because too many characters want to have sex with her.
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Ebony intends to slit her wrists because Draco died, but the sight of Snape and Lupin spying on her interupts her plans.
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Draco is alleged to have slit his wrists, but the story changes with no explanation to Voldemort holding him prisoner. Late in the story it is also stated the lead singer of a band killed herself.
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Not related to autism or anything of that nature, just due to the characters being awful people and poorly written. Ebony and Draco both have what could be called meltdowns, where they scream and swear at each other, then start crying.
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Almost every named character is stated to have depression or be depressed. One of the professors also has substance abuse problems.
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No one has an eating disorder, but anorexia is glorified at least once.
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Very often. It is also glorified.
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Draco says "I used to want to commit suicide" and Ebony states she wants to die to be with Draco. Who is no longer dead a few chapters later. In author's notes, the author threatens to slit her wrists if she gets any more bad reviews.
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It's a written story, so no actual audio, but characters are described screaming at each other constantly.
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Lots of swear words. "Fuck" is used often. Dumbledore infamously calls Ebony and Draco "motherfuckers" in an early chapter.
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Ebony is spied on when taking a bath. She does eventually notice. Dobby watches Snape and Lupin "do it" but it's not clear if they know.
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Several times, the author breaks what minimal continuity or immersion there is to give her opinion on something in the story, make a terrible pun, or explain why she loves bi guys. These breaks are sometimes marked with an A/N or "author's note" but not always.
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Draco is bi (in the My Immortal universe) and kills himself. Until that is suddenly retconned.
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Fetishized depiction of bisexual men. It doesn’t help that the author wasn’t above using homophobic slurs to refer to her critics
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Mostly in the author's notes, where the author insults people who gave her negative reviews. She calls them "gay f*gs."
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Not jokes, but there are comments equating being thin with being sexy. A female character is described as "thin enough to be anorexic" but also possessing big breasts.
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In an author's note the author calls reviewers "gay f*gs."
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Much older men spy on a teen in her bathroom.
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Not in any profound way but Ebony talks about Satan and being a Satanist a few times.
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Very early in the story Ebony and Draco "do it for the first time" in the Forbidden Forest.
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Several poorly, POORLY written sex scenes.
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Sex happens often, but no BDSM is involved.
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The characters getting naked to have sex is described.
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Ebony sexually objectifies several male characters. She is only attracted to their physical attributes such as their abs, "gothic" clothes or them looking like singers from bands Ebony likes.
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Male and female characters cry all the time without negative remarks.
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Poor Dumbledore is accused of being dangerous because he has Alzheimer's.
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A character claims Dumbledore has cancer and dementia but provides no proof he actually does. There is no indication he is dying in any case.
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Dumbledore in this world has dementia and cancer. Or characters say he does.
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These characters absolutely lack the capacity for any philosophical discussion.
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The story ends abruptly.
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"Snaketail" is stabbed in the heart by Ebony. Blood is described as shooting out of him.
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Voldemort gives Ebony a gun but, despite several random gunfights, nobody is really injured by guns.
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