Does the dog die?
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My Immortal
Short Story • 2006 • Romance
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pro tip if ur actually looking for content warnings look at the themes page of the my immortal wiki
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Snape threatens to rape Draco but is stopped before he can.
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Is there excessive gore?
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A few mentions of blood but no organs/gore.
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Is there eye mutilation?
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The vampire characters will "cry tears of blood" when really upset, but it doesn't hurt their eyes.
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Is someone stalked?
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Voldemort keeps following Ebony to demand she kill another character.
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Ebony slaps Vampire after they make-out. Ebony blames Vampire for leading her astray from Draco. The making-out was fully consensual.
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It's stated that Voldemort became evil because someone broke his heart and hurt him.
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Most of the characters are 17, so technically minors. They are kidnapped, threatened by Voldemort, Ebony is told to kill Vampire (Harry). One character is stripped naked by this weird fic's version of Snape. In the fic's "gothic" backstories for characters, one character was raped by a family member.
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Addiction
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Pot, coke, crack, cigarettes, and generic "drugs" are all consumed, usually at or before MCR concerts.
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Is there addiction?
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There are many comments about Ebony, Draco and random characters doing "pot, coke, and crack" as well as smoking "drugs." One of the professors also has a stated addiction to a substance called "Voldemortserum." Exactly what that substance is or its effects aren't clear.
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Does someone abuse alcohol?
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Underage characters drink after a concert.
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Animal
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Are animals abused?
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There are no animals in the story. Even Hedwig is transformed into a gothic, angsty teen.
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Assault
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The victims are in their late teens, but still underage. The term "pedo" or "pedophile" is used a TON in this story. Ebony calls several professors, including Snape, Lupin, and Hagrid, pedos.
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Is rape mentioned?
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Several times. It is attempted at least once, but Ebony, for no logical reason, asks Lupin if he plans to rape her when he knocks on her door.
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Is someone beaten up by a bully?
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Ebony bullies a "prep" named Brittney multiple times because the prep wears pink and likes different music. Ebony also sucks someone's blood against their will for saying Ebony is scary.
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Is someone restrained?
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Ebony, Draco and Vampire are placed in chains by Snape. Later Snape is chained up for his evil deeds.
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Snape (or Snap) takes off all of Draco's clothes and threatens to sexually assualt him.
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Bodily Harm
Is there shaving/cutting?
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Many, many references to characters self-harming with razors
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Does someone become unconscious?
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Ebony seems to pass out when having "visions."
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Is someone tortured?
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The Cruciatus curse gets tossed around like it's going out of style. Snape also has whips, for some reason, and beats Draco and Vampire with them.
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Children
Does a kid die?
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"Snaketail," who is the story's version of Wormtail, is de-aged to 16 for reasons unknown. Ebony stabs him to death for kidnapping Draco.
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Is a minor sexualized?
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Ebony is 17 and her outfits, which are usually provacative with short skirts, cleavage, huge slits, and leather are described in agonizing detail. Ebony is also described having sex often. And filming a porno with Draco.
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Death
Does someone sacrifice themselves?
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In a way that makes zero sense, but yes. When Ebony goes back in time, she jumps in front of a bullet to save Draco's dad.
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Disability
Is the r-slur used?
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There is a line about Voldemort getting a "dude, you're so retarded look on his face" when he confronts Ebony early in the story.
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Family
Does a parent die?
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Vampire's (Harry Potter) parents still seem to be dead. One of the "gothic" characters had a father commit suicide.
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Is someone kidnapped?
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Draco. Voldemort apparently "has him bondage."
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Does someone cheat?
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It's a mess of cheating. Ebony cheats on Draco with Vampire. Vampire used to be with Draco until Draco cheated with some prep. Ebony accuses Draco of cheating.
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Is there a shower scene?
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Ebony takes a bath and is spied on by 2 adult men.
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People slit their wrists or cut themselves with razors probably once per chapter.
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Gross
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LGBTQ+
Is there bisexual cheating?
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Ebony accuses Draco of cheating on her with Vampire (Harry). Vampire is Draco's ex boyfriend, and Draco cheated on him with a girl. Ebony makes out with Vampire while she is dating Draco.
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Is there a hospital scene?
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Ebony goes to the hospital after slitting her wrists. The author also states that she had to go to the hospital for the same reason. After Lucius and Sirius are rescued, they are described being on stretchers and given medicine by a nurse.
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Mental Health
Does someone have a mental illness?
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Almost every named character is stated to have depression or be depressed. One of the professors also has substance abuse problems.
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Very often. It is also glorified.
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Is a mentally ill person violent?
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I think they're all mentally ill to some degree. Most characters are also violent and pull out guns or use curses on each other.
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Ebony intends to slit her wrists because Draco died, but the sight of Snape and Lupin spying on her interupts her plans.
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Does someone say "I'll kill myself"?
National Suicide Prevention Lifeline (1-800-273-8255)
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Draco says "I used to want to commit suicide" and Ebony states she wants to die to be with Draco. Who is no longer dead a few chapters later. In author's notes, the author threatens to slit her wrists if she gets any more bad reviews.
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Is there body dysphoria?
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Ebony states she wishes "Satan had made her less beautiful" because too many characters want to have sex with her.
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Does someone have an eating disorder?
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No one has an eating disorder, but anorexia is glorified at least once.
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Draco is alleged to have slit his wrists, but the story changes with no explanation to Voldemort holding him prisoner. Late in the story it is also stated the lead singer of a band killed herself.
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Noxious
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Is there obscene language/gestures?
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Lots of swear words. "Fuck" is used often. Dumbledore infamously calls Ebony and Draco "motherfuckers" in an early chapter.
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Paranoia
Is someone watched without knowing?
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Ebony is spied on when taking a bath. She does eventually notice. Dobby watches Snape and Lupin "do it" but it's not clear if they know.
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Is the fourth wall broken?
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Several times, the author breaks what minimal continuity or immersion there is to give her opinion on something in the story, make a terrible pun, or explain why she loves bi guys. These breaks are sometimes marked with an A/N or "author's note" but not always.
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Pregnancy
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Prejudice
Are there homophobic slurs?
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In an author's note the author calls reviewers "gay f*gs."
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Does an LGBT person die?
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Draco is bi (in the My Immortal universe) and kills himself. Until that is suddenly retconned.
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Is a minority is misrepresented?
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SiRenfield
Fetishized depiction of bisexual men. It doesn’t help that the author wasn’t above using homophobic slurs to refer to her critics
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Is there hate speech?
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Mostly in the author's notes, where the author insults people who gave her negative reviews. She calls them "gay f*gs."
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Relationships
Is there a large age gap?
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Much older men spy on a teen in her bathroom.
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Sex
Are there nude scenes?
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The characters getting naked to have sex is described.
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Does someone lose their virginity?
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Very early in the story Ebony and Draco "do it for the first time" in the Forbidden Forest.
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Is someone sexually objectified?
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Ebony sexually objectifies several male characters. She is only attracted to their physical attributes such as their abs, "gothic" clothes or them looking like singers from bands Ebony likes.
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Are there incestuous relationships?
National Sexual Assault Hotline 800.656.4673
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Is there sexual content?
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Several poorly, POORLY written sex scenes.
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Is there BDSM?
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Sex happens often, but no BDSM is involved.
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Sexism
Is a male character ridiculed for crying?
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Male and female characters cry all the time without negative remarks.
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Sickness
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Does someone have a chronic illness?
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Dumbledore in this world has dementia and cancer. Or characters say he does.
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Is there dementia/Alzheimer's?
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Poor Dumbledore is accused of being dangerous because he has Alzheimer's.
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Social
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Spoiler
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Violence
Is there blood/gore?
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"Snaketail" is stabbed in the heart by Ebony. Blood is described as shooting out of him.
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